Argumentative essay

<Co-ed schools are better than same gender schools>

  Today, there is a lot of controversy between co-ed school and same gender schools. I will tell you my opinion on this controversy. I think co-ed school are better than same gender schools.Let me give you supporting details and rebuttal to opposition viewpoints.

  First of all, co-ed schools faster adaption to society. When we head into society after we become adults we have to adapt and be independence. But if we do not go to co-ed school, we do not know about the other gender. If that situation occurs, people cannot adjust and become confuse in new society. To prevent that, we have to go to co-ed school. One very famous psychologist from Oxford said that co-ed schools are better for society and students' growth.

  Second, I think co-ed schools are better for understanding new characteristics. When we go to same gender school, we cannot understand about other gender that has totally different with their gender's characteristics. And because they are too different, they always argue and fight. Then, it will be much better if you were friendly and understood the opposing gender right low it a social problem like bullying. Also, if we go to co-ed schools, we can acquire of characteristics the opposing sex and it will help students to become familiar with opposing gender. The famous debate organization, www.debate.org said that co-ed schools are scientifically, psychologically, and socially better than same sex schools.

  Some argue same gender schools are better. They argue about clothing problems. If there are co-ed schools, boys and girls are in there together so if they have to change into exercising clothes, problems occur. Some boys see girls. But that's all false. Nowadays, there are changing rooms in major schools: girls' and boys' each. I do not understand why they worry about that.

  Next, they talk about love problems. I know that loving can occur cause serious problems. But, in schools, there are still schedules to teach students. So, in class things like that do not occur often. I think that arguement is not appropriate. also, some live is needed and cynergize with study, so it does not make problems.

  As a conclusion, co-ed schools are better for our society and our future. Schools are teaching and give education to future and make students to prepare new real society. Sine school is important, we have to choose co-ed schools.

Drabble- Santa Turmoil

Santa Turmoil

  Twinkling stars, bright villages. Christmas Eve. There's a boy named 'Jason' who is intelligent and curious about many things. Because Christmas is coming, he became curious about Santa’s existence. The sun is set and night started. Jason could not bear curiously. 11 o’clock, 12 o’ clock Accidently, he could hear a walking sound and saw a shadow! His heartbeat became quicker. Shadow became larger with larger sound! Hush! Someone was there! Someone was go to the Christmas tree and put something under it. But, it was his father. Jason surprised. His father saw Jason and started hiccup. Jason got it!

Response essay

<Brave response essay>

"Brave". This was a movie that  I recently watched. Before I saw the movie, I thought it is lost girl's adventure, but it wasn't. It was a very touching movie because of the change of fate and conflict between the mom and a princess Merida. So, let me start response with some ideas to this movie.

First of all, I'll talk about Merida and her mom's relationship. They are totally different from each other. Merida loves to do archery and she is a very active girl. She is also good at sports. But on the other hand, her mom has strict rules to teach Merida. She just pushed Merida. So, she is really different from Merida's characteristics She didn't want to be princess. She just wanted free and happiness, not strict, limited things. Thus, I think the conflict between Merida and her mom, Elinor is bound to happen. My opinion is the solution wasn't good. They just fight and Merida tried to change her fate. After, her mom became bear because of a spell Merida had put on her the spell was broken. I understand that director make the tapestry solution because it's a movie. However, when we just see that story, the solving does not fit to my thinking I want talking and conversation, the problem with negotiation between each other.

Secondly is fate changing. In the movie, wisps lead some road to change fate, But Merida meets a witch, Merida made her mom into be bear, with the witches' spell. Then, after, she tried hard with some adventures, she changed her mom back again. In this part, I could learn a proverb. Fate cannot be change with magic or other's force. We just can work. So, I realized that when the big wall is in front of me, I'll try to get out if it, knock it down. Not ignore it, not call help to others. Myself, on my effort, I have to do it, no one except me. 

Finally, I want to discuss my opinion about what the bear symbolizes. If I change into bear one day suddenly, I'll feel very bad and have to have serious days of rears. Like what Merida's mom, Elinor did in movie. But, I think there's some meaning. There's an allegory about changing into a bear. I think that means a step to charge fate. If there's a conflict, we need some time to release and solve. We need to solve some angry feelings. I can analyse it in different way, too. We can say with fate changing of changing fate with magic, in my opinion.

In conclusion, today, I talked about my opinion of the movie, "Brave". I hope that conflict's solving method will become different if we can remake the movie. But, I still like this movie because it shows love between mom and daughter. I recommand this movie to  everyone because this movie is very touching and I think people can get different feelings each as an old.

Thank you!

I also post a trailor so please help yourself.

And if you want, you can watch a movie.

It's very interesting!

Diamante poem

Now, I'll post my diamante poem that shape like a diamond. It is very easy to create it so it'll be okay to try, too.

Blue

deep    fur

settling  naiving   freshing

breeze    clear    fire    tough

firing   running   glowing

harsh   enthusiasm

red

The one below is just tip to write your poem, the proper words and places:

noun

adjective  adjective

ing-verb  ing-verb  ing-verb

noun         noun         noun         noun

ing-verb  ing-verb  ing-verb

adjective  adjective

noun

Thank you^^

MY ODE

Precious Mr. Pencil

Mr.Pencil,

 It's me. Your favorite, best friend Eungyul Oh. Mr. Pencil, Mr. Pencil. I am the closest person with you.You are always friends while I study and I use you a lot. You let yourself be harmed for me. You become dull, you become  shorter. Even you lose in the longest pencil competition you help me, you give up anything for me. 


Crackling, crackling, Mr. Pencil. You can bear anything and you can are patient with everything. Doesn't it hurt if I sharpened you? Aren't you dizzy wen I spin you? Didn't it hurt when I  broke your feet? You are best one that I know for having patience.


Mr. Pencil, you are the best volunteer as well. You sacrifice yourself, you are patient with pain and all harm. I know that you try hard. So I will try hard to not break you and not to split you up.


Mr. Pencil, Mr, Pencil, you are my partner. You let me write what I want, when I want. I still write with you to write this letter. Thank you, Mr. Pencil, you are the best.

Your best partner and closest friend,

Eungyul OH

My 3 goals

Hello! Today, I am going to post my three goals that I will get in these 30 days.

Goal 1: Control my time well

Step 1: plan what I have to do

Step 2: Use and hold place it in my time schedule

Step 3: Use and hold my schedule, review after that

Goal 2: Hold my sleeping feelings

Step 1: Do something that I can concentrate

Step 2: When it is sleepy, wash my face

Step 3: Check the time that I went to bed every day and review

Goal 3: Self-study

Step 1: Plan myself

Step 2: Do something in my own effort

Step 3: Review and remind them

Thank you and I will do my best to summit these goals!

Hello, Everyone!!

Three things about me

1. Mt. Daemo

2. 0

3. History

  Hello, everyone! My name is Eungyul OH and my English name is Sophia. I will introduce myself so please read it carefully.   My apartment is in front of the Mt. Daemo so it is a good place to live in my opinion. Also, because of that, our school name is 'Daemo Elementary school'.  To introduce about '0',  It means that I have no siblings. So I'm very lonely but I'm nit envious of others who have siblings.   Lastly, I love to study history most of all the subjects because I want to be an archaeologist. These were my introduction about my living, siblings and dream. Thank you.^^