Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Argumentative essay

<Co-ed schools are better than same gender schools>


  Today, there is a lot of controversy between co-ed school and same gender schools. I will tell you my opinion on this controversy. I think co-ed school are better than same gender schools.Let me give you supporting details and rebuttal to opposition viewpoints.

  First of all, co-ed schools faster adaption to society. When we head into society after we become adults we have to adapt and be independence. But if we do not go to co-ed school, we do not know about the other gender. If that situation occurs, people cannot adjust and become confuse in new society. To prevent that, we have to go to co-ed school. One very famous psychologist from Oxford said that co-ed schools are better for society and students' growth.

  Second, I think co-ed schools are better for understanding new characteristics. When we go to same gender school, we cannot understand about other gender that has totally different with their gender's characteristics. And because they are too different, they always argue and fight. Then, it will be much better if you were friendly and understood the opposing gender right low it a social problem like bullying. Also, if we go to co-ed schools, we can acquire of characteristics the opposing sex and it will help students to become familiar with opposing gender. The famous debate organization, www.debate.org said that co-ed schools are scientifically, psychologically, and socially better than same sex schools.

  Some argue same gender schools are better. They argue about clothing problems. If there are co-ed schools, boys and girls are in there together so if they have to change into exercising clothes, problems occur. Some boys see girls. But that's all false. Nowadays, there are changing rooms in major schools: girls' and boys' each. I do not understand why they worry about that.

  Next, they talk about love problems. I know that loving can occur cause serious problems. But, in schools, there are still schedules to teach students. So, in class things like that do not occur often. I think that arguement is not appropriate. also, some live is needed and cynergize with study, so it does not make problems.

  As a conclusion, co-ed schools are better for our society and our future. Schools are teaching and give education to future and make students to prepare new real society. Sine school is important, we have to choose co-ed schools.

7 comments:

  1. Eun-Gyul,

    This is a good essay and you used evidence to support your points. When you mention the psychologist from Oxford you should say his/her name. Keep up the good work!

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    1. i completely don't agree. I'm sorry, but i think that single sex schools are so much better. I'm sorry dude.

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    2. BITCH? HELL NO. I TOTALLY... hahahahah hehehehe never mind.

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  2. okay im sorry but this is wrong. I get that co-ed schools are good, but single sex are also good. FIrst of all, have you ever heard of a girl getting pregnant at 16 from a single sex school? no. have you ever heard of a girl having a relationship with a male teacher in a single sex school? no. have you ever heard of a gay kid committing suicide from a single -sex school? no. Personally I like co-ed schools better, but in single sex schools, there is less bullying, and less kids in garbage dumps.

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    1. When you use logical fallacies in your response, your argument loses much of its effectiveness. The non sequitor assumption that single-sex schools inherently reduce suicide bullying and "kids in garbage dumps" simply does not make sense. Not only is it bad logic to assume that just because something hasn't happened yet makes your argument, but you also base your reasoning on the very small sample size of single sex schools as compared to the number of co-educational schools. Perhaps you should cite some evidence when claiming that somebody else's argument is wrong instead of resorting to logical fallacies to prove your point.

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    2. When you use logical fallacies in your response, your argument loses much of its effectiveness. The non sequitor assumption that single-sex schools inherently reduce suicide bullying and "kids in garbage dumps" simply does not make sense. Not only is it bad logic to assume that just because something hasn't happened yet makes your argument, but you also base your reasoning on the very small sample size of single sex schools as compared to the number of co-educational schools. Perhaps you should cite some evidence when claiming that somebody else's argument is wrong instead of resorting to logical fallacies to prove your point.

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