Precious Mr. Pencil
Mr.Pencil,It's me. Your favorite, best friend Eungyul Oh. Mr. Pencil, Mr. Pencil. I am the closest person with you.You are always friends while I study and I use you a lot. You let yourself be harmed for me. You become dull, you become shorter. Even you lose in the longest pencil competition you help me, you give up anything for me.
Crackling, crackling, Mr. Pencil. You can bear anything and you can are patient with everything. Doesn't it hurt if I sharpened you? Aren't you dizzy wen I spin you? Didn't it hurt when I broke your feet? You are best one that I know for having patience.

Mr. Pencil, Mr, Pencil, you are my partner. You let me write what I want, when I want. I still write with you to write this letter. Thank you, Mr. Pencil, you are the best.
Your best partner and closest friend,
Eungyul OH
Eun gyul,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on this ode. It is very creative and descriptive. I like the personifications you used as well. Keep working hard!
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ReplyDeleteIt is a nice ode and I enjoyed reading this. You used descriptive language very well. Keep up the good work~
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)