Thursday, January 10, 2013

MY ODE

Precious Mr. Pencil

Mr.Pencil,

 It's me. Your favorite, best friend Eungyul Oh. Mr. Pencil, Mr. Pencil. I am the closest person with you.You are always friends while I study and I use you a lot. You let yourself be harmed for me. You become dull, you become  shorter. Even you lose in the longest pencil competition you help me, you give up anything for me. 


Crackling, crackling, Mr. Pencil. You can bear anything and you can are patient with everything. Doesn't it hurt if I sharpened you? Aren't you dizzy wen I spin you? Didn't it hurt when I  broke your feet? You are best one that I know for having patience.



Mr. Pencil, you are the best volunteer as well. You sacrifice yourself, you are patient with pain and all harm. I know that you try hard. So I will try hard to not break you and not to split you up.


Mr. Pencil, Mr, Pencil, you are my partner. You let me write what I want, when I want. I still write with you to write this letter. Thank you, Mr. Pencil, you are the best.




Your best partner and closest friend,
Eungyul OH

2 comments:

  1. Eun gyul,

    You did a great job on this ode. It is very creative and descriptive. I like the personifications you used as well. Keep working hard!

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  2. Hi!
    It is a nice ode and I enjoyed reading this. You used descriptive language very well. Keep up the good work~

    -Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)

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